Sunday, November 21, 2010

Blurred Portrait

The charcoal eyes staring out
Above a smudged nose
The quickly sketched mouth
Loose, unformed,
With teeth exposed
The portrait blurred,
Soft, unfixed, temporary
Partially wiped away--
The truest likeness


  1. Very well crafted..!!
    keep Writing My Dear.. :)

  2. Greetings!
    How is everything?
    Are you interested in theme writing? Do have poems related to dreams, visions, or reveries?
    If YES, welcome linking your poems to our potluck week 13 at Jingle
    Poetry :
    Even if your answer is no, you are more than welcome to link in old poems, or poems unrelated to our theme (dreams, visions, or reveries) and enjoy the fun of sharing and encouraging!
    Our week 13 potluck is open Sunday, 8pm, American Central Time…We will be thrilled to see you in…
    Let me know if you have questions

  3. I feel like landing on north pole,
    white and bright,
    dreamy place tom be...

    lovely blog,
    beautiful poetry, well done,
    keep it up.